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THE NEWS

Major Book Updates Incoming

28/1/2021

 
Front cover of 'Steal from the Devil'
Front cover of 'List of the Dead'
Front cover of 'The Ravening Deep'
Front cover of 'From Shattered Stars'
As I mentioned previously, refreshed versions of the current novels (volumes 1–4 at time of writing) will be released soon. The plan is to release them all together for both the Kindle and paperback editions, including the omnibus and boxed set versions.

Books 2–4 will only be getting minor tweaks and corrections — nothing major needs changing. The files for the paperbacks, Kindle individual titles, and Kindle boxed set versions will be getting a hard reset to the "master version" of their respective texts (I've noticed slight discrepancies between the editions, thanks to a sloppy workflow.) The rear covers of the paperbacks will also be tweaked to make them look a bit more professional.

However Steal from the Devil has had a massive overhaul. I consider this the fourth edition, and some of you won't like this but there's... like... more material. I know, I know, I thought I was making tweaks and I guess I just got carried away. What I can say is that the longest new passages have all been character-based additions with the exception of the climax which gets some more action.

I will make sure Amazon KDP pushes the refreshed SFTD as a free update to Kindle customers. For paperback customers, you'll have three options:

  1. Buy a new paperback (don't worry, it'll be the same size and cover style as the current one).
  2. Refer to my Patreon page for free excerpts with the most substantially changed material. It's not posted there yet, but it will be when the revised books launch.
  3. Ignore the changes — no plot has been altered so nothing that follows on from SFTD is affected.


So what has changed in Steal from the Devil? Here are some examples:

  • The entire first chapter (intro to Hammer, Santani, and Caden) has now been restructured to reduce the choppiness of it all.
  • Chapters 18 and 19 were swapped for pacing reasons.
  • The super-long chapter 20 was split into two, creating Chp. 20 "Hammerfall" and Chp. 21 "Light the Dark".
  • The order of scenes in the last three chapters has been rearranged to improve the flow of action and make the pacing far better.
  • The climactic confrontation is no longer just a case of finding Morlum, having a quick chat, then shooting something real quick. A lot more is said, the tension is raised considerably, and a lot more actually happens.
  • Maber Castigon is fleshed out slightly more, and we get to read a little about the way he sees the world.
  • Euryce Eilentes is also fleshed out more, and we learn things which preface her arc in the later books.
  • Bruiser has been given a bit more of a role, seeing as we all love him so. 
  • Some very sneaky foreshadowing has been made more obvious.
  • Mobile Air and Ground Assault (MAGA) has been changed to Conventional Air and Ground Assault (CAGA), as it will now be known across all books and supporting materials.
  • "Skinprint" is now written as "skin-print", to aid people whose first language is not English. I mean they deserve some chance, right?
  • Significant numbers of tweaks and edits to sentence structure, grammar, etc.
  • Improved typography and punctuation has been modernised.

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          • The Intangible Hope of a Silver Dawn
          • Irim Su
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          • Jewelled Entreat of Blessed Devotions​
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